Induction Essay
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the way in which Keats depicts power in ‘La Belle Dame sans Merci’
Keats takes the reader to an archaic world of fantasy in his
ballad ‘La Belle Dame sans Merci’ on an exploration of the nature of power, and
how even those at the top of the social or intellectual hierarchy can be
subject to something with power over themselves; Keats also looks at the power
dynamics between the genders. In the poem, Keats reveals his own sense of
powerlessness, in the enchanting language inspired by a poet generations before
his time, Spenser. In ‘La Belle Dame’, Keats reaches back into the Spenserian
era to show sharp contrasts with his own, commenting on how his world does not
demand the same powerful respect as the idealistic realm Spenser revealed to
Keats does.
The protagonist is a ‘knight-at-arms,’ a character more
suited to 16th century pieces of fiction, and seemingly out of place
in a more contemporary poet’s work. The fact that the central character and
poetic form are traditional contradicts with how the character is actually
presented. He is not how you would expect a traditional, chivalric knight. In
contrast to the knights surroundings, where the “squirrels’ granary is full”
and the “harvests’ done,” implying a world full of plenty, the knight is
“haggard” and “woe-begone,” implying weakness and emptiness. The power that we
expect from such a character is not there, and the abruptness of the mere
four-syllable line at the end of the quatrain jumps out at the reader, halting
the energy of the poem. The knight could be an allegoric self-portrait of
Keats, the poet famed for having an effeminate nature.
The atmosphere of the poem changes as the knight seems to
take over as narrator. Now, there are breaks- caesuras- in the stanzas as he
describes a woman (“Her hair was long, her foot was light”). The caesuras give
the poem a more natural flow, helping to build the image of the enticing woman
who, gathering from her description, the knight seems to idolise and marvel at.
Yet, the knight seems to control her, and Keats’ language objectifies her: the
knight makes a “garland for her head,” makes her bracelets, dressing her like a
doll, and he sits her on top of his horse. She is described as being “Full
beautiful—a faery’s child”. Whilst the word “beautiful” seems complementary and
“faery” adds to her enchanting mystique, the word “child” is condescending; the
knight assumes a power over here even whilst idolising and adoring her. Keats
could be reflecting society’s objectification of women and men’s power over
them in his time through the language he uses to place the man in a position of
power over the woman. However, if we look at the woman as more of a symbolic
literary construct, the knight’s simultaneous idolisation of her and control
over her suggests that she is a personification of Keats poetry, or poetry in
general. It is the thing that inflames his imagination, like Spenser’s ‘Fairy
Queen’ inspired him. He can create and control poetry, using literary
techniques to convey whatever plays on his mind ad toils within his heart. And
yet, this woman is not a completely sympathetic character, and Keats’ knight is
not completely in control.
In stanza 9, the knight recalls how the woman “lulled me to
sleep,” shifting the power balance and placing it in her hands; now the knight
is vulnerable. When she lulls him to sleep, he is plunged into a series of
disturbing dreams, which are reminiscent of the hallucinations one sees when
intoxicated, just as the knight seems to be intoxicated with the woman. Placing
this series of events back into what could be one of the literal readings of
the extended metaphor, Keats seems to be exploring the power of addiction.
Keats’ mind is enthralled by poetry, and yet the nature of writing poetry-
commenting on society and politics in an artistic way- can cause him pain, as
it allows him to see the flaws in modern society. For example, in this poem, he
explores how women are objectified in society and seen as weak, but are also
held accountable for wrong-doings, like leading men astray with sexual
behavior. This is one inference that can be made from the hallucinations that
the knights sees: he seems to see past male victims of the woman, La Belle
Dame. He sees “pale kings and princes” who seem to have, like the knight, been
enticed and tricked by the woman, as they yell out: “‘La Belle Dame sans Merci/
Thee hath in thrall!’”. Woman have often, throughout history, been portrayed in
literature, even in religious texts, as either damsels in distress or a feme
fatale- a sexually promiscuous temptresses who leads men astray. Keats seems to
portray society’s double standards in ‘La Belle Dame’.
Reading and comparing the idealistic world of Spenser to his
own industrialised and increasingly capitalist society, Keats’ Romantic mind
seems to be saddened. Poetry involves extensive use of the imagination, which
can link the real with the ideal and unveil the flaws in reality. This seems to
be Keats’ addiction and one of the readings of the woman in ‘La Belle Dame’.
The fact that the woman in the poem leads men away from the real world into an
ideal one, only to leave them blighted and ill, shows Keats’ disillusionment
with reality.
By the end of the poem, we return to the knight, who is
still lead “alone and palely loitering,” still weak and empty, almost as if he
were dying or wasting, just like the “sedge is withered from the lake”. One reason for the knight being in this
state could be because, as discussed, he is led to represent the suffering from
addiction. However, given the context, he could also be weak from the wasting,
draining power of love, another one of Keats’ addictions. He is no stranger to
illness; when he wrote the poem he was suffering from tuberculosis, which those
beloved to him had died from. Describing the knight as “pale” and showing him
as weak after his encounter with the woman, Keats seems to compare the power of
love with the potency and destruction of illness. This would be a reflection of
Keats’ own deep love for Fanny Brawne, who he could not be with due to his
poverty, but whom he was deeply in love with.
Keats, in stanza 10, seems to tell the reader that every man
has his own ‘La Belle Dame sans Merci’- his own addiction. Even powerful, authoritive
“kings and princes” are “death-pale” and weak at the mercy of what addiction
has them captured, just as Keats is captured by his own addiction.